Friday, April 28, 2017

Life In A Shell Comments

Rating: 4.8

As I pick up my pen to vent out on these pages
All the thoughts, feelings and words come running down
Feels like it has been ages…
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ahlaam shah
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Madhuram Sharma 26 May 2017

very nice.......dear poet

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Akhtar Jawad 23 May 2017

I never lost my faith despite what happened, I know you exist and I will wait… A great poem on hope.

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Rameeza Nasim 30 April 2017

Wow lovely poem love the way you expressed the feelings of fear and hopelessness and still carry on the process of dreaming.. one should dream on.. check my poem dreaming too :)

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Rameeza Nasim 30 April 2017

Beautiful poem love the way you express your feelings of fear and hopelessness but won't give up dreaming.. yes we should dream on :) check my poem dreaming

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Jazib Kamalvi 28 April 2017

A good start with an optimistic poem. Thanks

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Hira Shah 29 April 2017

thank you so much :)

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