Saturday, December 29, 2007

Life In A Metro Comments

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I live in an apartment on the first floor,
With my name engraved on a brass plate on the door.
Since I am most of the time alone,
The only time I see a soul
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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 20 July 2008

the old days twinkle in my mind.thanks for this lovely piece Mamta. I missed you too.

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Kesav Easwaran 15 May 2008

This is an awesome write. When it comes to narration I have seen many a writer drift into prose style. But this vivid narration of yours is top class poetry. Wonder why this poem doesn’t catch much attention of the readers! A clear ‘ten’ for your superb poetic narration!

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