Life In A Lie Comments

Just read this beautiful poem. A mature work from someone of your age. 'Tattered life Full of strife Eating you to the marrow Wish you could break everything And fly away like a sparrow' - Wow! That's a beautiful observation! 'Is it fair To be robbed of An only love's fair share? ' - No, dear poetess, certainly not.

that is really good isabella. i would like to read alot more of your poems.

Thanks Matthew........

This was an amazing poem, be sure to check out my 'The Fake People' and comment, c:

Thanks guys for your encouragement..... I'll make sure that I share every poem of mine with you....

Speechless! After reading this well penned and poignant poem that clearly shows your great poetic talent! I am so glad that you broke the ice and decided to post your first poem and definitely not your last since with the talent you got, you have long road to travel and impress the whole World with more of such thought provoking writes! 10+++ God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ...

Amazing, Philosophical. Imvite you to read my poems, Light a Lamp of Faith, An Innocent Village Girl, and comment.