Tuesday, September 10, 2019

Life Goes On (Part 1) Comments

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My noble bread winner died
When my preoccupation was my belly
One of the many sacrificial lambs
To the cause of one nation
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Kingsley Egbukole
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Bri Edwards 30 November 2019

i'd like to have punctuation to help me discern where sentences end. and a Poet's Notes would help me to interpret some things here. is " He" God? the topics are clues, but i see no topic of God or religion. hmm? let me read Part 2. bri :)

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Kingsley Egbukole 01 December 2019

Thank you dear friend. The " He" is God, that is why the h is in upper cap. I quite appreciate your suggestions regarding punctuations and topics. Nice learning from you.

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