Wednesday, November 4, 2015

Life Goes On Comments

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When your energy goes
Your lights go dim
It happens to her
It happens to him
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James Smith
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Dr Antony Theodore 11 April 2019

When starting afresh It's best to be hopeful The next life is better So why are we doleful? modern way of looking at life and happenings. only in a prayerful life, the joys of togetherness will live. a very fine poem my dear poet. tony

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Dr Antony Theodore 07 June 2017

When starting afresh It's best to be hopeful The next life is better So why are we doleful? hope in the great struggle of life.... hope in the midst of adversities. thank you dear poet for spreading such great ideas...... tony

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Shakil Ahmed 04 November 2015

beautiful poem with end-rhyme, thanks for sharing,

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Rahman Henry 04 November 2015

Lovely poem with illusive composition. I like it.

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