Friday, July 6, 2012

Life Goes On Comments

Rating: 5.0

It's the rat race
You want to blame,
Or then again
Maybe it's just your given name;
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Smoky Hoss
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hi well written better words connected to make sense beautiful. try reading my love poems to enjoy and comment as well

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Heather Wilson 13 July 2012

You`ll find yourself as life goes on and on.... such wise words, a great poem.

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Juan Olivarez 13 July 2012

we complain whether it's rain or sun, we are never satisfied, but...life goes on, yes indeed.

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Captain Cur 09 July 2012

Not only a great write but plenty of wisdom going on and on in this poem! Great write, great life!

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Joseph Anderson 09 July 2012

Give me that train thats bound for Glory.A great summation of the way it is. A worthy write

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Eric Cockrell 07 July 2012

yes it does.... keep walking, breathe deep, and pull down the brim of your hat...

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Valerie Dohren 07 July 2012

Life goes on and on and on - it certainly does Smoky, and sometimes gets you down. Great write and so true.

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Words of creative truism...Like the rhyme-scheme...solid crafting ~FjR~

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