Monday, September 19, 2016

Life Goes On... Comments

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A right of everyone, this walk of life
be on a road of blooms or thorns, who cares
we wish to make the strides, in joy or strife,
lazy or brisk, till whizzes wind through nares.
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Sathya Narayana
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Rajnish Manga 19 September 2016

Very well articulated. Yes, the life goes on despite the ups and downs. The rhyming is wonderful and the choice of words is superlative. Thanks. we wish to make the strides, in joy or strife, In every step there's hope, desire and want

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Ratnakar Mandlik 19 September 2016

Taking the life in it's stride one must learn to enjoy sunshine as well as gloom which is necessary to understand the Rhythm of Life. Enjoyed the meaningful poem. Thanks for sharing.

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