Thursday, January 18, 2007

Life Goes On... Comments

Rating: 5.0

The sky is on fire,
sun and birds going to sleep;
ending perfect day
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Joey Christian
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Yekaterina Bezpalaya 22 February 2007

I love it. I love the way you make the obvious truth brilliant. It shows that simplicity has its own unique beauty, and that we can find amazement in even the most random things of life. Keep, writing, great poem!

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Patricia Gale 18 January 2007

What a splendid reminder of the truth...

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Jim Foulk 18 January 2007

your right, life goes on, very true, a great, well written.

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