Tuesday, March 27, 2012

Life Force Comments

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The day is grey, a chilly wind
Catch my breath as I walk slowly to the lake.
Sharp stones crunch down beneath me
As the rowing boat drifts gently from the shore
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sunnetra basu
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Ramesh Rai 10 April 2012

And all the world flows from my eyes, set free by Force and Fell. nice.

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Neela Nath Das 27 March 2012

Your vivid description has made me see the unseen beauty of nature.Nice poem!

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