Tuesday, April 7, 2015

Life Force Comments

Rating: 5.0

In pensive, anxious moments,
Across lips strained and silent,
I whisper the sweet syllables
Of her name and once more
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R B Seals
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Dr Antony Theodore 21 September 2015

Her spirit comes to me to flow Within and my soul becomes Unbound, set free to roam. passion, love and elevation into a sort of resurrection in the sweet memories. very fine poem. thank you

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R B Seals 21 September 2015

Hello, Tony! Thank you for your review of the writing. I am pleased you found enjoyment in the sample lines selected for your remarks. Best wishes, sir!

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Darlene Walsh 20 April 2015

It sounds very sad, and lonely, but but beautiful and full of pleasant memories. Did she die? Sorry to ask, but that's the impression I got.

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R B Seals 21 April 2015

Hi! Thank you for your reading of the work and your noteworthy and sincere interpretation.

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Kelly Kurt 07 April 2015

Lovely, R B. Thanks for sharing

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R B Seals 08 April 2015

Thanks, Kelly, for passing along your positive comment.

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