Wednesday, November 16, 2011

Life For The Living Comments

Rating: 5.0

A painful memory
of a time gone by
Slices through my mind
Like a fine cheese wire
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Dave Alan Walker
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James William 31 December 2011

is it true life is for a living i knew it great poem

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Ramesh Rai 29 November 2011

Really, Life is for living. great poem. great thoughts. xlent.

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Len Webster 24 November 2011

Concise. I can almost hear - as well as feel - the slicing!

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Melvin Banggollay 23 November 2011

Short yet vividly speaks the longest essence of life. Great piece brother.

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Smoky Hoss 22 November 2011

Memories, both tough and gentle, are the seeds that grow into hope. Good poem.

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Phyllis Strong 22 November 2011

Short in words, but straight to the point. 'Life is for the living.' Life is a vapor.

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Cosmic Dreamer 21 November 2011

Your poems are precise and to the point... A very refreshing view of the importance of life and living it... Very nice write...

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Marieta Maglas 21 November 2011

Dave, your poem is amazing and I agree with you''That life is for the living ''-thank you for sharing

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John Mccullagh 20 November 2011

good image using the cheese cutter

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Sajna Kailas 20 November 2011

yes, you are right, ' life is for the living ' very good positive thought!

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Jacqui Broad 19 November 2011

Yes, I have to agree, but if we die we live till eternity. This life is just a train station...

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Smoky Hoss 19 November 2011

'Live to give.', and by your wonderful writing you do give well, keep it up.

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Eric Cockrell 19 November 2011

yes it is... live strong, and dare to risk... another good poem!

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Unwritten Soul 16 November 2011

Positive..you hit the light when it is dark, you leave the past for better life...all you've done here to cover all bad with smile..a hope to survive..Live your life with passion after all pain you face with patient :) _Unwritten Soul

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Pari Dharawat 16 November 2011

Small yet strong poem, the advice is sincere. Even mundane things around us have the power to remind about living. nice poem

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Paul Brookes 16 November 2011

great poem Hit the spot. Well done.

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Dave Alan Walker

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