Monday, November 24, 2008

Life For Death Comments

Rating: 5.0

A newly born flower
Slowly blowing her horn
Fresh grasses all over
Smiling on its thorns
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Ashraful Musaddeq 25 April 2009

Amazing

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Dr Kamran Haider 08 December 2008

This life is like that as we see it with a human eye.. But did you ask the flower, how she feels about this life... You have beautifully touched a very sensitive subject with sincerity and purity of your thought... A beautiful write indeed...

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Reshma Ramesh 01 December 2008

great write, superb title..........loved the words u have used..........well done

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 28 November 2008

No one is indispensable......................flowers die too.

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Lynda Robson 25 November 2008

I enjoyed reading this, very well thought out, thanks, 10 Lynda xx

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Blue Eyes 24 November 2008

interesting this poem is.i like the image of the flower u used.

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Sarwar Chowdhury 24 November 2008

Fine composition! mature thoughts Ammmmmmazing imagery! 10+++

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Naru Kaede 24 November 2008

Hmm, , you're right, , I ever read in book, that lot of bugs have a short life, than i just wondering, , , for what they live in this world, , , just life for death? ? ? hmm, , his one it's very interesting, , come what may, we must fight! even in the end, we must die...

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 24 November 2008

Is life made as fodder for death that it devour both small and great. Good images. 10 out of 10

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Ency Bearis 24 November 2008

great composition...marvelous thougths of flower being a warrior..well done..10 Ency Bearis

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Kesav Easwaran 24 November 2008

will be reborn...if the sacrifice was for a noble cause...crusifications haven't stopped yet...thoughts weird but they converge on a central point; Faith...impressive write 10

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Homen Thangjam 24 November 2008

Inception of the idea is simply great. Depiction of a flower as a knight, positioning two binary opposites is a rare gem. Portrayal of the poem is a surreal marvel. Great work Min.

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