The dark horses come
galloping across the fields,
crushing every single one
of my sky blue orchids.
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Nice poem... Life goes on and stops for none.. Good job..
Oh how 'grounded ' your poetry is despite its very special beauty..Pia
An admirable write - blending east and west. Imagist imagination. A River Walk.
william...that is one of the most positive poems i have read...thanks...love...nalini
You got a lot of comments! That first stanza is really strong, you got some elemental images that really embody the power of Nature!