Friday, June 21, 2019

Life, Fill It From Within Comments

Rating: 5.0

This life, a deep well,
Filled from without, it won't swell,
From within, it shall.
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Kumarmani Mahakul 21 June 2019

Life has been well compared with well. A brilliant haiku.

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Aniruddha Pathak 22 June 2019

Thank you Kumarmani M, for the feedback.

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Beautiful Haiku. Truly Yogic. The outer sources are but an illusion, it is the inner self that enriches and enjoys perennial bliss.

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Aniruddha Pathak 22 June 2019

Thanks for the feedback, Geetaji, we are of the nature of sat, chit, aananda. A little probe within and joy and bliss flows from that source.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 21 June 2019

Sir, your short and witty poems are highly expressive! Appreciated the concept.....10

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Aniruddha Pathak 22 June 2019

Thank you Dr Swain for your encouraging comments and a rating of 10.

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