Thursday, July 23, 2020

Life Eater Comments

Rating: 5.0

Some deaths proffer life
Human hungry the store house,
Grave of many lives!
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MAHTAB BANGALEE
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Dr Dillip K Swain 12 November 2022

Wonderful expression.... well penned.5 stars.

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Mj Lemon 30 July 2020

Brilliant Mahtab...feeding on oneself... How emotions can indeed lead to that " grave of many lives! " A fantastic verse!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 28 July 2020

A well inked poem. Simply excellent....10+++

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Aarzoo Mehek 24 July 2020

We all are the victims of greed at some point of life. Profound truth written in few words.10+

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M Asim Nehal 23 July 2020

Profound, greed in humans nicely portrayed.10+

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