Life, Dreams, Reality Comments

nice poem. love the style. the emotion seeps through into the crevices of the reader's heart. Something seems off though, i can't place my finger on it. Last stanza. Not to sure, check it out, no? anyways, whether you do or not is your choice and either way your poem is awesome, not meaning to degrade the work with such a common word full of nothing more than un-knowledgeable figures that loom in one's own mind. Thanks for the idea, lol. That which looms in one's mind. I'll make a poem out of that. lol.