~ LIFE DIVINE ~
Ms. Nivedita
UK
8 January 2010.
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Sharp, blunt, short and straight fwd. Life is what you make it to be, it leaves you with no one but you to blame or credit to...a layout of your decisions n choices..deep emotional expression lightly described...b'ful write...
life divine is better as always.. we should really enjoy it.... nice write ma'am!
I give ditto to comments of Sr. Poet Ejaj Khan … Short but wide horizon … depth is unfathomable … 10+++ Dr. V
what a b'ful poem......with an absolute start...resign n consign... limited wordings making the meaning stupendous... i love this write...10 from my side...
Complex and occult Divinity made simple and visible…in poet’s candid way… Thanks for this great write…in ‘water-fall’ scheme… AB 10+++ London
Wow! ! Hmm. Wisdomful …sleek satiny… Thanks 10++
Souse-a new word for me...liked the crispness of expression
Life is exactly that what you think it to be, I can't question the way you perceive it, but I can certainly see that your write is short and yet elegant!
a short poem very well written, thank you for sharing 10/10
Succinct, but meaningful. Each new day is a gift and well worth living.10, for you. Kind regards, Sandra
The words used are a bit unfamiliar but the content is expressed well and made to understand. Short and simple expression of life.
Stroke of refined emotion ‘Divinity’ in a very cute but resolute way… one has to Resigns [Mundanity] and Consign to Divinity thro’ dedoping …enjoyed Ms. Nivedita…thanks.. 10++
I fully endorse posts by Sr. Poet Kesav, Lynn and Ravi… Their comments are well addressed to the poem… 10 Ms. Nivedita UK
Short and sweet. Very thoughtful write Enjoyed life divine 10+
I think you were gifted to write the short poem and i adored this one. They are short but divine and never ending, Very enjoyable. Your poetic friend Lynn
WISE Poem! ! … One reader questioned ‘dedoping’ actually in Vedantic thought we’re deluded [doped] and to come out of that dedoping required …it is ‘Inner Enlightenment’ Poet has Indian base…that feedbacked her to portray this poem… Thanks for such a poem… 10++ dr.sakti
A poem so simple yet sweet...life, divine or not, is certainly enjoyable...delusions there are part of its game I am very much amused by the hard way one poet friend down the line tries to bring out the air inside this beautiful poem baloon without breaking it! sensible write...10
And be bathed in bliss and pure in heart, though there's nothing really to add to the short and much to say of this poem. Just an association.