Life Descending Comments
Darkness falls in shades of gray
Where sunlight once did shine,
Shadows gather deepening
Thoughts that once were mine;
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LINDA...This is an absolutely awesome write...love the refraining elements... abstract imagery places the final fleck of drape on this masterful picture window of darkverse..Got to hand it to you...I pride myself on darkside verse...trust me...this is superior work...Think I better find a NEW strong suit''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''frank/fjr
the most beautiful death song...but sad...different folks different strokes...slowly ebbing but looking in awe and wonder would be my take...love...nalini...ten to you
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8/14/2025 11:44:42 AM # 1.0.0
The ebbing of life is a very challenging object of contemplation, but this is a stunning triumph. The sense of loss is tangible and clear, but you flick a little light onto the proceedings in the very final stage. As Frank says, this is superior quality work. x jim