Life, Death, Heaven, Or Hell? Love? Comments

nice poem, but some times we don't get to pick what one we go to, but we can always hope

Hi Sarah - Interestin poem - interesting choice. A well structured free verse poem with good rhythm and readability. It scores a MAX (TEN) . V 1 love and life are inseparable. V 2 But we have to come to terms with death as well. V 3 Death is the end of Physical Love but it can be the beginning of an invisible eternal love. V 4 Death is cold - but not the end of love - unless (V4 & V5) our beloved is lost in Hell for eternity. V 7 However there is an alternative destination HEAVEN where we will be reunited withour loved ones. V 8 - 9 - 10 Present us with a choice. 'The choice is yours so be wise to yourself. Would you rather be with your loved ones forever (in Heaven) or live in fear for eternity (in Hell) '. I know which one I have chosen Sarah - how about you? Love you in Poetry - JOHN.

Good write well express......