Wednesday, July 7, 2021

Life ~ Death Comments

Rating: 5.0

Life is a well-written lyric with an uncomposed music.
Death is well-composed music for an unwritten lyric,
All drama starts with life and ends with the death
Both have a distinction of innocence with the grandeur of purity.
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M. Asim Nehal
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Michael Jack 09 July 2021

We all are just actors.

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Ricky Magnathen 09 July 2021

Yes they Both have a distinction of innocence with the grandeur of purity.

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Shreya Hacks 09 July 2021

They are two sides of a coin.

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Saurabh Munshi 09 July 2021

Kya khhob lika hai Jindagi ka phalsafa.

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Indira Renganathan 09 July 2021

Totally truth speaking words...a short and succinct poem...5*****

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Mamta S 09 July 2021

A brilliant piece of writing.

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Life and death have its purity and significance. Marvellous poem four line both in Hindi and English. Top stars Asim ji

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Sylvia Frances Chan 08 July 2021

Two most important Topics in our Existence: Life- Death. Most deserving poem to get 5 Stars fullest on TOP, Mr. ASim Sir! Great philosophy upon Life and Death.Great owrds, great Lines from A Greatest Heart: YOU, Sir!

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Varsha M 07 July 2021

Sir these verses are heart touching. So well thought and composed. Alikhit sangit mrityu ka cheekh cheek har baya kar raha likhit par sangeet rahit jivan ranjan ka mano na mano tum.... sirji trying to play eith your conceived ideas. Thst is really thought provoking.

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Juhaina Tumlu 07 July 2021

Your lines reminded me something: All drama starts with life and ends with the death.

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Poetic Sky 07 July 2021

I totally agree..Both have a distinction of innocence with the grandeur of purity.

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Darren Jkoeryo 07 July 2021

Wow Life and death both in unique way. Fantastic. My Fav

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Lasaad Tayeb 07 July 2021

Great poem, and wise meanings, rated 5*, in my favorite list.

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Li Su Pen 07 July 2021

Take to my favorits with pleasure. Thank you

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M. Asim Nehal

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