Winter cold we are born
One of strife
To this we are sworn
This, the cycle of life
...
Read full text
RG...this your poem shows life in terms of an allegory of the passage of the seasons...composed in alternate rhyme and couplet form...giving the touch of rise n fall n occasional balance in the ride of life...it's a good poem...
A really wonderful poem, I really really enjoyed reading this, a great write.
A vivid, truthful journey through our hurried life.A well done, worthy write