Saturday, December 26, 2015

Life - Choice Comments

Rating: 5.0

Quality of life chosen by human or given.
Question natural developes in everyone mind.
Que line arise in our mind answers fighting each other.
Quitly thinking all the pro & con of every answers.
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Ajay Srivastava
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Spock The Vegan 26 December 2015

Queer (strange) poem with all lines staring with Q, but good nevertheless. I think you want the word WHETHER in place of WEATHER. Good message. TFS

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Ratnakar Mandlik 26 December 2015

It is natural that every one desires to lead quality life, however, it depends on many factors, either chosen by choice or thrust on that person by circumstances. Beautiful thought provoking poem. Enjoyed reading.10 points.

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