Monday, December 25, 2017

Life; But Not Mine Comments

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Tears rolled down,
Sacrifices were made,
But you only saw
the apparent me.
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zainab ahmed
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Bri Edwards 19 November 2018

(CONT.) 3 - this poem [for me] ‘begs’ to have a Poet's Notes, OR needs rewording so i can understand it here: My heart cries sense me once, “sense me once” makes no sense to me! i'll read one more now. bri (:

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Bri Edwards 19 November 2018

(CONT.) 2 - i wonder why Rajnish uses formidable and why you agree with him (see his comment) . I looked up 'formidable'; i did not realize respect could be involved. i think MORE of something relating to fear as the definition(s) , which i found online, gave to me. (CONT.)

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Bri Edwards 19 November 2018

1 - Did you mean: exquisite? “of special beauty or charm, or rare and appealing excellence gaffe an unintentional act or remark causing embarrassment to its originator (CONT.)

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Dr Antony Theodore 30 December 2017

Your words trample over, My heart cries. sufferings in relationship portrayed so well dear poetess. thank u.. tony

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Zainab Ahmed 31 December 2017

thank you so much sir. Its just that a poet writes down all the deep feelings.Happy new year

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Rajnish Manga 29 December 2017

sense me once, Life is yours, not mine.... //.... Misunderstandings need to be cleared in a mutually formidable atmosphere.

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Zainab Ahmed 30 December 2017

i totally agree with you sir. Thank you.

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Jazib Kamalvi 25 December 2017

A great start with a nice poem, zainab a. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Zainab Ahmed 26 December 2017

thank you so much.i would love to read your poem.

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Sekharan Pookkat 25 December 2017

Love life and see the flaws and compromise to tears for better life

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Zainab Ahmed 26 December 2017

i appreciate your comment.

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Beautiful poem Zainab Thank you for sharing Mario Odekerken

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Zainab Ahmed 26 December 2017

thank you. i hope to bring out more good poems with this start.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 25 December 2017

A wonderful poem Elegant poetic expression I liked it

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Zainab Ahmed 26 December 2017

thank you so much.

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