Tears rolled down,
Sacrifices were made,
But you only saw
the apparent me.
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(CONT.) 2 - i wonder why Rajnish uses formidable and why you agree with him (see his comment) . I looked up 'formidable'; i did not realize respect could be involved. i think MORE of something relating to fear as the definition(s) , which i found online, gave to me. (CONT.)
1 - Did you mean: exquisite? “of special beauty or charm, or rare and appealing excellence gaffe an unintentional act or remark causing embarrassment to its originator (CONT.)
Your words trample over, My heart cries. sufferings in relationship portrayed so well dear poetess. thank u.. tony
thank you so much sir. Its just that a poet writes down all the deep feelings.Happy new year
sense me once, Life is yours, not mine.... //.... Misunderstandings need to be cleared in a mutually formidable atmosphere.
A great start with a nice poem, zainab a. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks
Love life and see the flaws and compromise to tears for better life
Beautiful poem Zainab Thank you for sharing Mario Odekerken
(CONT.) 3 - this poem [for me] ‘begs’ to have a Poet's Notes, OR needs rewording so i can understand it here: My heart cries sense me once, “sense me once” makes no sense to me! i'll read one more now. bri (: