Life; But Not Mine Comments

(CONT.) 3 - this poem [for me] ‘begs’ to have a Poet's Notes, OR needs rewording so i can understand it here: My heart cries sense me once, “sense me once” makes no sense to me! i'll read one more now. bri (:

(CONT.) 2 - i wonder why Rajnish uses formidable and why you agree with him (see his comment) . I looked up 'formidable'; i did not realize respect could be involved. i think MORE of something relating to fear as the definition(s) , which i found online, gave to me. (CONT.)

1 - Did you mean: exquisite? “of special beauty or charm, or rare and appealing excellence gaffe an unintentional act or remark causing embarrassment to its originator (CONT.)

Your words trample over, My heart cries. sufferings in relationship portrayed so well dear poetess. thank u.. tony

sense me once, Life is yours, not mine.... //.... Misunderstandings need to be cleared in a mutually formidable atmosphere.

A great start with a nice poem, zainab a. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

Love life and see the flaws and compromise to tears for better life

Beautiful poem Zainab Thank you for sharing Mario Odekerken

A wonderful poem Elegant poetic expression I liked it