Saturday, May 14, 2011

Life - Between Two Points Comments

Rating: 3.0

Life is long, yet so brief,
Like a sentence, between two periods,
Like a phrase between two words,
Like the pain before relief,
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 14 May 2011

Awesome work. Great sentiments with nice style. Great write indeed. I rate it 10. TFS. Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Please use search box if the page does open with the title of the poem.

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B.J. Ayers

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