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It took me a while to know your game
You don’t let anyone easily make a name
Complacency and temptations are your ancient tools
To beat the wisest and make them look like fools
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Beautiful. Well written. But it seems shallow, lacks depth and feeling. I give it a 9.
'Complacency and temptations are your ancient tools' Rachel Ann Butler
A beautiful poem written with absolute faith...and I believe it. Alas, life does not make it easy for us but we must embrace it and learn from it to become strong enough to get through it.
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7/30/2025 4:36:07 AM # 1.0.0
A true and thought provoking subject in beautiful words. Your language is lucid, cogent and the diction is perfect.....One of the best poets I have read in this site.