Technically, this is not a very good poem. The repeated use of 'you 'is OK,
as long as it's always used, but it wasn't. That's bad.
There are a few well rhythmed and rhymed lines but that's about it. The message
was not the best either as was reflected in the poor ending.
GW62
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Technically, this is not a very good poem. The repeated use of 'you 'is OK, as long as it's always used, but it wasn't. That's bad. There are a few well rhythmed and rhymed lines but that's about it. The message was not the best either as was reflected in the poor ending. GW62