When proud ones boast
Of all that is loftiest
In his faith,
In her flag,
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the message is powerfully packed..The piece said it all. It pays to be humble, and not to brag your talents, your riches and your position in the society.
And this IS how it is... Well done and thank you, Robert. Esther
Robert, a unique spin on the Biblical reference to God opposing the proud and giving grace to the humble. Awesome write... point well made! ! Brian
Abso-bloody-lutely. Beautifully written piece... Allie xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Message loud and clear and masterfully, enchantingly portrayed. t x
An honest truth without any fuss! this will be a tattoo in every heart.
this is one of the best poems i have ever read...and i don't really have the words... so all i want to say is thanx for sharing... peace and love on earth **KoNi**
This is great. It is just the sort of thing that faiths require the skill and imagination to take a concept (good/evil) and reduce it to a simple understaning without loss of meaning. I always have admiration for this sort of work which I think finds its parralel in the old political and agitational slogans.
Excellent title. Noble sentiments eloquently expressed. Praise for your caring soul. Regards, Sandra
robert...can i say this is a masterpiece? ...beautifully structured...solid in content...packed with truthful emotions...just loved it...love...nalini
We need more caring souls and not those proud ones, Let the meek inherit this earth! -Raj Nandy