Thursday, October 11, 2007

Life At The Local Is Constant Comments

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Piano flows through the air,
Breathing life,
The voice of the lone singer,
Hums to himself,
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Melissa Coventry
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Alison Cassidy 12 October 2007

You paint an evocative picture here Melissa - very Australian in tone and abrupt in delivery. Your poem flows comfortably and your images touch both the eyes and the ears of the reader. Excellent poem. love, Allie xxxx

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Melissa Coventry

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