Saturday, April 18, 2015

Life As We Know It Comments

Rating: 5.0

Lets keep our lives in a bottle of wine
Feel the essence, world seems fine
Gulp it once, higher and higher you go
The wine of life you don’t need to let go
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Chhavi Kad
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Jazib Kamalvi 06 October 2017

A sublime start with a nice poem, Chhavi. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Chinedu Dike 18 April 2015

It's a lovely piece bristling with insight. A highly inspirational poem, well articulated and nicely penned with depth of insight. A poem that encourages the readers to take things and situations in stride. I like the rhyme scheme of the poem and I concur with the conviction of the poet. A powerful poem with great message. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Kelly Kurt 18 April 2015

A wonderful poem, Chhavi. Keep writing

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Chhavi Kad 18 April 2015

Thanku Kelly :)

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