Thursday, August 27, 2015

Life Around Fire Comments

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Kept away, while being a child, when attracted to flames,
Curiosity amplified to touch get feel; attempts went futile.
As I grew, realized, wise were my parents who kept me aside.
My tender skin could have hardly endured the burning fire.
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M. Asim Nehal
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Darren Jkoeryo 20 December 2015

Merry go round the fire.......10

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Sanjukta Nag 27 August 2015

Really our life is around fire and it is felt again through this poem. very nice poem with a philosophical tone. thank you.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 27 August 2015

What a great write it is! So truely and nicely depicted about the fire around us. The favourite lines are .... Wise were those who counsel to keep away from Enquiring eyes, intimidating mind and piercing figure Didn't realize, it was the same fire, Boiling blood anesthetized my mind and eventually lost paramount youth life. Thanks for sharing......10

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T Rajan Evol 27 August 2015

Another fantastic poem. Life is truly around fire and we are doing camping.

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