A life anew
Is what
God pleases
With us now.
...
Read full text
Haha, I felt the same looking at the title but you know they are unique. Further I published this poem ib the month of September- a month earlier to yr poem! So logically speaking you copied mine...... Just kidding Sir! Thank you for the read and lovely comment! Best wishes!
hahaha..hey this poem looked as a copy of mine, , , , same title...nice one
A lovely verse, with deep emotions. Beautifully penned.
''a life without sin and all kinds of greed a life to forgive and love sinners yet hate sin ''................excellent ! love it
every word is endorsed here...a heartfelt prayer is also a blessing of God, we talk to Him, when He makes us able to receive this honor...the pen catches the mind of the poet...it is a very good prayer poem...
A great prayer poem to God. A lfe to forgive and love is what we all need. Lovely writing Shahzia
A good prayer to god. May he give his eyes and give what you want. Well done!
Like a snake casting its old skin, let us leave behind a life of sin and hate and become renewed beings in God! A chaste wish beautifully expressed, Queeny!