Friday, November 7, 2008

Life And Mysteries Comments

Rating: 4.5

THE LIFE COULD BE DEATH
AND DEATH COULD NOT BE LIFE
BECAUSE DEATH GIVE'S US A NEW LIFE
AND DEATH IS LIKE TO GET OUT OF DOOR TO
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jhon fernandis
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Brandon Dugan 17 May 2009

Very different but very nice i liked it keep writing buddy

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 29 April 2009

your migrane will go off if you keep your stomach clear. so take some liquid peraphin once in a week every week with empty stomach in the morning. second life is so interesting that is not mystery but way of life and you are on mission send by THOU. just think what for you have in this world will all satisfy your misgivings. it's beautiful poem but life is all about and we got to live it cheerfully. i rate it 8

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 29 April 2009

life is a mystery but that's what makes life so interesting! outstanding poem!

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Aldo Kraas 28 April 2009

That is a very interesting poem

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rago rago 12 February 2009

Life always ups and downs. Life is not hard but we are. Beautifully thought and flow. use it..........

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Chitra - 30 January 2009

brilliant thoughts on life and its ways..

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Sreelekha Premjit 12 January 2009

Its a nice poem, its incredible that being so young you should think of such grave subjects...to write about...

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Maxim Muyu 31 December 2008

It's very awesome about life and death, very lovely piece.

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Liz Williams 05 December 2008

your way of thinking has completely wrapped my mind around the subject. It's so amazing how you completely described the question of some thing so open ended. I love it.

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