Sunday, January 13, 2019

Life And Lies Comments

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After typing Li a finger slipped to a mess,
And touched the button of "f…" instead of "e",
His computer was there for another bless,
It added itself the be-headed "e",
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Akhtar Jawad
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Edward Kofi Louis 24 January 2019

There lies the case! ! Base of the truth, Vase full of lies! ! ! ! With the ways of mankind on earth today. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Chris Embrick 24 January 2019

There seems to be little difference between lies and the truth these days. One slip of the hand and a letter unplanned leads to a misinterpretation of the facts. A clever and truthful poem. Enjoyed.

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Marie Shine 14 January 2019

Automation has become so popular and I pray that a day never dawns when it takes the place of human beings. Wonderful thought provoking poem, dear Akhtar. Tfs, dear friend...

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Akhtar Jawad 13 January 2019

Sorry, I wrote it in a funny mood.

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