Life And Jeans Alike Comments
Life to me, is like a pair of jeans
Some of them shouldn't be seen
Others are too short
Or has begun to distort
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To me my jeans are still a mystery When I grew out of them one day I'll find out But that day is not today- - Metaphoric. poetic and fine.. thank you dear for giving us a sense of mystery of life. tony
2 – i'd delete " But" here: " But some are colorful" " When I grew out" make it " grow" I shy away from symbolism, but I enjoyed it here! To MyPoemList. Bri :)
1 – 1 - Line 4: use " have" , not “has” i'm liking this so far. but " abused" AND " mistreated" ? I’ll call it redundant, but so be it! some favorite lines: " Some are worn out and others doubt It's worth anything Some say a lot and others do not They are just there"
Yeah, I know it's not that great. I wrote this when I was 15. I debated uploading it, but it's nice to see where I started and how far I've improved.
Such a nice poem, Caroline Ann. Read my poem, Love and L u s t. Thanks.
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7/29/2025 11:09:35 PM # 1.0.0
A poem that's a cut above the rest. When I get hole in the knees of my jeans I turn them into a pair of shorts. A good poem.