Wednesday, August 24, 2022

Life And Death Comments

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Amongst the stars that shine tonight,
I search for you so desperately,
Your photograph I hold so tight,
I'm missing you so endlessly.
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Jayne Louise Davies
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Nosheen Irfan 26 August 2022

It's hard to let go of the ones we love. Memories can bring both joy and pain. Human emotions captured beautifully.

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Richard Wlodarski 25 August 2022

He would want you to move on. True love always sets us free. Beautiful poem, Jayne.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 24 August 2022

yoou've touched my soul with this write

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Dr Dillip K Swain 24 August 2022

I must move on and realise, 'part of life is death'...true dear poetess

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Jayne Louise Davies

Jayne Louise Davies

Abercynon, Rhondda Cynon Taff
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