Thursday, October 3, 2019

Life, An Awaiting Game Comments

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Man's life, a waiting game like repeat rhymes,
In womb and waiting, months look like long years,
In pains then he's delivered, all in tears,
But the game goes on as do testing times.
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Kumarmani Mahakul 03 October 2019

Man's life, a waiting game like repeat rhymes, In womb and waiting, months look like long years, In pains then he's delivered, all in tears, But the game goes on as do testing times......so touching and true. Yes, man's life is a waiting game. A brilliant poem is astutely delineated. Thanks for sharing.

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Aniruddha Pathak 04 October 2019

Thank you dear KM for liking this sonnet

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