Sunday, April 27, 2014

Life After Death Comments

Rating: 5.0

His voice beckoned to her across the plastered hallway
Her steps studdered with uncertainty
The bruise around her eye still ached from moments ago
The voices from her phone silenced as they no longer picked up
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Kewayne Wadley
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Ramesh Rai 14 May 2014

When life is recovered after death it forgets all past . A beautiful composition in framing out the words and sentence. nicely penned.

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Kewayne Wadley

Kewayne Wadley

Groton, Connecticutt
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