Friday, August 15, 2014

Life, A Void Circle Comments

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Life is a void circle,
I am at its center.
So, it's no matter
If the circle is
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Khairul Ahsan
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Darlene Walsh 31 August 2014

Living in a void, never getting any closer to anything else. It sounds so lonely and sad. Someone must take a pie shaped slice from your lonely circle so you can find a way out.

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Khairul Ahsan 11 March 2020

Dear @Darlene Walsh, Very sorry to know of your husband's demise, thanks to poet Bri Edwards. Hope you have recovered from the shock and doing well, with God Almighty's Blessings. My very best wishes for you and your children. And thanks a lot for you kind comment you left on my poem 'Life, a Void Circle' long time back. Appreciate your comment. Khairul

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Amitava Sur 28 August 2014

Though it may sound pessimistic but the harsh truth is like that only, like or not, doesn't matter, we have to pass through it.... very well written

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Khairul Ahsan 08 March 2020

Thank you very much for your kind appreciation, @Amitava Sur.

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Guy Dimitri Jagodinski 18 August 2014

Great poem and interestingly very true. Made me think abut my life and circle.

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Khairul Ahsan 08 March 2020

@Guy Dimitri Jagodinski, I am glad that my poem has made you think about your life. Much inspired by your comment, thank you.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 15 August 2014

Beautiful poem..what radius a circle has, center is the same ..we are human our aim is same...rich or poor, black or what, English or Turkish Allah is one The center thanks Allah Hafiz

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Khairul Ahsan 06 March 2020

Thanks for sharing your thoughts after reading my poem, @Aftab Alam Khursheed- Jazaq Allah! May Allah SWT rest your soul in eternal peace and grant you a place of honor in Jannah, on the Day of Judgement!

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