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A great start with a nice poem, Umul. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

Excellent poem. Just an overview of life itself. I truly love this.

it's cool..and simple.you've managed to keep the rhythm.and it's true that life ain't a bed of roses yet we never want to loose it!

Life is a fusion of confusions. I like how you made something so complex sound so simple and inspiring. Do keep writing more.

Well done! You've made my day with your open mind. Ihope you will continue to express yourself.

REALLY REALLY THIS IS A FANTASTIC ONE I LIKE IT. IN SUCH A YOUNG AGE HOW YOU DARE TO THING ABOUT LIFE! YOU ARE VERY BRAVE AND MUST BE TALENTED, THE WAY YOU MANAGE THE TOUGH TOPIC SHOWS YOUR RAW MERIT...KEEP WRING MORE SUCH POEMS.

Magnificent, I really love this poem. You have done a remarkable work baneen, especially at the age of 15. It is a marvelous art of thiking from your side. I wish you read more from you....

@ beckhammition sheyan Lol! ! I will read it. :)

A really awesome mind blowing poem and please check out my poem and comment well i am just 11

@ dave walker and yogi drake. Thanks for your apppreciation!

A really great poem, like it, a great write. May i invite you to read my new poem called, Holy Man.

What an insightful attempt! ! Keep on doing the good work!