Wednesday, January 25, 2017

Life- A Stream Of Water Comments

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A narrow stream of water rolls down
Silently, like a reptile homeward bound,
Where, unsure!
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Khairul Ahsan
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Edward Kofi Louis 21 October 2020

" Expans as she moves" ! Muse of a lovely river flowing; Till it reaches the sea! ! ! Such is life! With the muse of mankind on earth; The journey, Life by birth, Till the end by death. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Valsa George 02 February 2017

Beautiful................! . Yes, life flows to an uncharted destination.... collecting pebbles and producing bubbles!

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Khairul Ahsan 06 June 2020

Thank you Valsa George, for leaving such a precise comment here. You have brought out the gist of the poem in just two lines.

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Spock The Vegan 25 January 2017

Thank you for this thoughtful poem!

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Khairul Ahsan 25 January 2017

Thank you too, Spock The Vegan, for reading the poem and kindly commenting. Much obliged.

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