Life...A Song Comments

Life is nothing but, ...............Beautiful words.

Great expressions. Life is a song that we all add our voices to. Its duality is a pitch of highs and lows that gives it all the meaning.

What a beautiful poem, a song and an anthem of life. Nature- inner and scenic - is part of a divine game plan. Thanks for sharing this lovely poem.

And song of Abhilasha..............100+++

Life holds everything! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

life has so many definitions, one will never finish counting them.....you did such a good job defining life.

Life is indeed a song. Sometimes the notes are low, sometimes high but flow is always there. I like it that you thought of life as a song. Its a lovely idea.

So true! Life is made of all these things. Take it all! Love it all! Endure it all!

All these melt into the music of the divine gong.

Once again, this poem is filled with the beauty of imagery, but it gets lost in the repetition of the words, song of. This would definitely be a great song in itself with a definite rhythm of it's own, just needing to be rearranged without the use of song of. When writing my poetry I constantly use a thesaurus to look up words with like meanings, it helps to increase my vocabulary. Also use it when doing crossword puzzles instead of a dictionary. Hope I'm not overwhelming you, I just really like what you write and look forward to reading more of your poetry in the future. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

Great, everything is a song and can be sung

Just read this poem of yours. Life is a beautiful song and a beautiful poem, it's true! The poem would have looked better, if it would be trimmed a bit shorter.

Life is all of these and all beyond these. Nice expressions and poem.

This one is similar to your College like life poem both of which i enjoyed...As Souren said some words need to be gone over to make it flow better..But at the end of the day, it's your poem, and there is beauty in our flaws..Take care god bless :)

very nice, some sing a happy tune and others not so happy, but the souls sings always

Beautiful. Loved it :)

That's a beautiful one. Very clearly articulated.

U definitely covered the grounds of what life consists of... thnx 4 sharing yr comment... keep writing

Life a song, an excellent write.

Life is allows for all feeling us a good poem