Sunday, September 16, 2007

Life: A Salutation Comments

Rating: ★3.5

Today when I was
sitting near my balcony
having a sip of tea
alongwith glance
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Mahfooz Ali
Wings
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Max Reif 16 September 2007

Your point is well taken. The poem with the bird illustrates it well, very well indeed! (ps: In my opininon, the piece will stand better as a poem if you omit the last few lines, maybe after 'warrior'. For the story of the bird speaks for itself.)

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Nf Shapourian 16 September 2007

Thank You, thought provoking in your connections.

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Mahfooz Ali

Mahfooz Ali

Lucknow (U.P.) India
Mahfooz Ali
Mahfooz Ali
Lucknow (U.P.) India
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