Wednesday, October 29, 2014

Life A Riddle..... Comments

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Fen was deep and volatile
Beyond the borders of shadows
Emptiness grooming inside
To proclaim the floppy trenches ahead
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Kee Thampi 01 November 2014

But greenery that never prohibited keep the greenery of nature in poems

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Heather Wilkins 31 October 2014

life is a riddle nicely written and we have a hard time understanding enjoyed

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Geetha Jayakumar 31 October 2014

Beautiful poem Salini. Very true said, life indeed puzzle us many times. Often we find ourselves standing in mid of riddles. Loved reading it.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 October 2014

Life is like a marshland sometimes, very beautiful lines composed in this poem and thought is presented in excellent way and shared here. Nice job.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 29 October 2014

Life indeed a puzzling thing......wonderful piece written beautifully..............

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Edward Kofi Louis 29 October 2014

Nice piece of work. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Shabeeh Haider 29 October 2014

Life is indeed a riddle. Well written. Please see my poetry and your comments will be appreciated

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