Life - A Haiku Comments

This free form Haiku and it was explained to me the syllable count doesn't need to be exact Haiku count if it is going to spoil them message. I have taken a look at it and it could be said - life is sweet haiku before death dials your number do all you can do This will bring it into the exact syllable count. However, I really liked the surprise at the end Nikunj with 'before death dials your number' as you originally have it. 10 love Karin

The number you have dialed is not in service at this time and there is no new number. Beeeeeeeeeeeep!

another great one here -10 anjali