Friday, September 4, 2009

Life Comments

Rating: 4.5

life is a narrow stream
draining into the lake
life is like a beam
through the window when you wake
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G. Alexander 09 September 2009

The write does demonstrate nice analogy throughout What I like most is the hope that you're dream will come true Although you're time here may be short in the grand scheme of things The faith that you're dream of trouble-less days will be realized is hopeful

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Milica Franchi De Luri 04 September 2009

nice analogy through out the poem, i like it

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