Sunday, August 9, 2009

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I trip and pick myself
Up I stand dusting out my pants,
And run for my life.
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Silvia Jen
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Bele Lele 13 August 2009

True poem, well written

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Mark Nwagwu 09 August 2009

you not only run, you run for your life - and that is an important 'for'. Liked this a lot, let's keep running FOR what is worthwhile, life.

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Siddharth Singh 09 August 2009

so nice and concised. Good work.

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