Friday, July 10, 2009

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The arms that have held me
The hearts that have love me
Have never been the same
The tears that fall down my face
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Sally Minns
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to first say about the way the poem flows or the word frame is well done, the poem was nice to read, but to me it sounds so melancholic, sally, life is always not in pain, just because rose has thorns we don't throw it away, we still adore the rose and its beauty always stay... enjoy your life.. next time i want to read a happy life poem from you... hope i will read soon...

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Matt Kephart 10 July 2009

ur not alone. i told you b4. im always here if u need me.

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