Wednesday, July 8, 2009

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a precious rose petal floating in the wind
Breath coming in thin wisps
Her hair a golden mist of sparkling light
Her face lifeless but beautiful in all ways
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Danny H 09 July 2009

I love your free verse rhythem in your poetry, its some what calming and takes in more of an effect of the emotions: Very well penned

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