Life ain't no dreams-
Illusions and Obsession,
have ruled your mind;
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You have beautiful way of saying things poetically. Your language and diction simple but your thoughts have profundity. Truly, our life is a dream within a dream. I specially liked, There is always something left in it- There is nothing in the world, You can live with ever; It is only dreams which rules forever. Even widows have to forget their husbands for kids, Even mothers have to forget their kids, Once they go to the war. A very good sharing, I enjoyed it. CP
‘…It is only dreams which rules forever….’ ~ very nice line for me... But as unknown poet love to dream and dream…please don’t take out my dream O’ Poet please … Nice poem… Ten… Ms. Nivedita UK