Friday, March 18, 2005

Life Comments

Rating: 4.9

I need you to follow this road,
A bumpy one in fact,
If you help me out,
We can make a pact.
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Robert Hall
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Angela Hansard 26 March 2005

Again great work. Keep up the good work. Jesus loves you and your family, never forget that.

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Nasra Al Adawi 25 March 2005

So simple but its has so much meaning into it...great work

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Lee Ann Schaffer 21 March 2005

Excellent once more, Robert! I, myself, think that pout fits best with the idea of the poem. I like the original word.

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Robert Hall

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